I’ve read many, many books. All sorts of books. Nonfiction, text books, novels from a huge variety of genres…and almost all of those books had one thing in common. Chapters. As I am finally approaching The End for The Compass Code, the idea of chapters is weighing heavily on my mind, because my novel doesn’t currently have any.
- a main division of a book, treatise, or the like, usually bearing a number or a title.
Another November has come and gone. I avoided NanoWrimo again this year, but I didn’t avoid writing. My kids and I made a wager that if I didn’t finish a second draft of The Compass Code, they would get to choose the dinner menu for a week. Think ice cream and bad pizza for seven days straight. Gross. So, I was motivated.
I made a list of over 30 missing scenes. I wrote the last missing scene from the list on November 30th. It took just over 36 minutes to print the 540 pages of a PDF of my second draft. It took six years and the threat of a week of ice cream and bad pizza for dinner for me to finally figure out how to finish a novel. Now, I have to figure out how to make it look like a novel—with chapters.
I like making lists. I like making timelines for my characters. I like writing down ideas and connecting them to each other with lines. It’s fun to play around with my writing in visual ways. But outlining? Oh, heck no! That’s work, not fun. That’s organizing, not playing around with ideas.
Breaking this novel into chapters feels like outlining. It feels like an impossible task. It’s work, and it’s hard. Bleh. I know I’m not going to get it right the first time. (Yay for beta readers!) But somehow, I’ve got to find those chapters.
I have a lot of short scenes following multiple narratives in the beginning of the book and I’m struggling to decide how to organize them so they don’t get confusing. Add to that, I’ve never even thought about the average length of chapters, or how many there should be, or how many scenes should be in a chapter… just how does one take all of the little pieces and construct a novel?
I found some helpful resources online, like this one. I read through the entire draft and tried to visualize chapter breaks. I set up a new draft project in Scrivener, and created the first three chapters, hoping to provoke some optimistic inspiration. I’m still feeling intimidated. But, this story has come too far to give up now. So, it’s on to draft three—and the very epic struggle to create chapters.
I guess I need to figure out what sort of wager with the kids will help me get through another round of editing by the end of December!